tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1320527647226544722.post5261801840576476265..comments2023-09-21T03:51:19.652-05:00Comments on Salty 'Ham Jam: a few page roughsChris_Garrisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15615953094478911201noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1320527647226544722.post-74894440056639508262011-05-04T15:19:41.105-05:002011-05-04T15:19:41.105-05:00gd pts, thx chris.
Turns out the collaboration is...gd pts, thx chris.<br /><br />Turns out the collaboration is DISSOLVED after all.<br /><br />I wanted some license to cut things, add bits of text etc. and that ended up being unacceptable to him.<br />TimRAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1320527647226544722.post-20624041906037337012011-05-01T23:44:02.713-05:002011-05-01T23:44:02.713-05:00Looks neat!
You had mentioned to me that the char...Looks neat!<br /><br />You had mentioned to me that the character's design could come off as Klan-ish, if you're not careful. I'd say the lower left panel of page 2 is the only one to worry about, because his head is a little pointier there.<br /><br />Pretty fun level of cartooniness. My only other comment is that you might want to put some floppy ends on the necks of the Obama masks, to make it extra clear that they're masks and not Obama clones or something. Or maybe they could be the kind of mask that just covers your face, with strings tying them on in the back.Chris_Garrisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15615953094478911201noreply@blogger.com