Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Ptooey & Loogie - The Mommy of All Hiccups, early pencil draft

My college chum Cheese Hasselberger publishes House of Twelve comics. He said I could contribute something to their upcoming kids' anthology, so I'm working on a 4-page Ptooey and Loogie story. Here it is in progress (click each page to enlarge) --

What do y'all think of this?

I plan to tweak the drawings a bit more, add gutters between the panels, and ink it all nice-like. I may change out some of the hiccup cure gags in the first half of page 2, so if anybody has ideas for improvements in that department, let me know.

As you probably know, Ptooey & Loogie were invented for the use of all Salty 'Ham Cartooneestas. Maybe if we collectively do enough stuff with them, we could set up a web-comic or self-publish something.

Invention of Ptooey & Loogie
The Secret Sorcerer comic jam, starring Ptooey & Loogie
4 more Ptooey strips by Garrison
Halloween Ptooey strip by Garrison


Lee Long said...

Very nice...creative POV on the story too. I think You've got a winner in the works here.

Chris_Garrison said...

Thanks, Lee!